Niceee!!!
For your first flash I think it's excellent. Usually people around here start with crappy sprite movies, boring stickfights and madness wannabes. good to see you actually didn't go the easy way and presented something with quality. It was short but to the point, i thought the abrupt ending was funny. The art was simple, but effective. I like the moogle character. You should make a series with him.
I would give an 8 normally but have a 10 for the effort.
And a 5 cuz i think is underrated.
Keep up the good work,
M.