For your first flash I think it's excellent. Usually people around here start with crappy sprite movies, boring stickfights and madness wannabes. good to see you actually didn't go the easy way and presented something with quality. It was short but to the point, i thought the abrupt ending was funny. The art was simple, but effective. I like the moogle character. You should make a series with him.
I would give an 8 normally but have a 10 for the effort.
And a 5 cuz i think is underrated.
Keep up the good work,
WOW! Thanks for the Review & I think I will make a flash series with him!
I don't see animations like this one often. I was amazed how well you managed to blend the cartoon character with the live video. I don't have actual criticism for your animation, everything was really good, from the idea, to execution and direction. And good job on keeping the video quality so high and still have a decent filesize. I'm still struggling with that.
Keep up the good work!!!
This one is terribly overrated!
So you basically ripped the graphics and animations from a video game, added random audio clips from movies or series and you made that flash. The humor and the visuals are good but they're not yours. When you're gonna do a sprite movie like this one, at least try to add your own voice acting and work on your own script and jokes. I give you one star for your effort to tween some of the sprites. And yes I expect all the 13 yr olds who like the videogame to mark my review as useless. I wish there was something in your flash I could constructively criticize. Sorry.
Sure, Np :)
I make these for the ppl who likes it and many does I but I dont expect everyone to do that. Thanks for the review ^^
Good job. Highly enjoyable!
The shaky effect was a little exaggerated and the guy was out of scale compared with the bg, especially when he was laying on bed. But overall it was really good.
I hope it doesn't get lost either!
It was really really good. Artwork was exceptional, good animation too. Music well suited and funny story. Maybe you should improve the sound effects a bit, like at that point the one guy was peeing or the running water sfx, sounded kinda weird. Nonetheless it was a great flash!
Well animated, funny and w/ an unexpected ending, i guess, short. Music was well suited. Maybe a little more detail would be good, but i understand you were going for a minimalistic style. Good job. I enjoyed it.
It was really good! Good job on the animation, and the voice acting was funny. It left me wanting more. I'm not talking about the length, i actually enjoy shorts. I was expecting something more crazy to happen. But nonetheless, great flash!
Previews, demos, trailers, that's why NG Alphas exist, so people can post their work in progress there. However, the low score isn't for that. The artwork is horrible at best, there is almost no animation while humor was also non existent but i guess you are kinda skilled with flash, i have to admit it. Try improving the artwork on the final version. Sorry.
There is one thing i don't understand.
I don't understand why people bitch about the "madness feeling". Personally i'm sick & tired of madness flashes, especially madness flashes that use over and over again the same sprites from the original author. Congratulations for your animation, great job doing it frame to frame, i enjoyed the different style, and the direction. You have skills. Great flash.
I must say, this was better than the original!
At least the animation and the overall feel was better than the original series! Well done! And you did all this with the mouse? That's incredible. I also liked the new female character!
Great work! Highly enjoyable!
I think it will definitely be awarded.
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